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Monday, October 26, 2009

Motul's Micro-site


Hey there!
The new showcase is Motul's micro-site for Bikeindia. Here's the direct link only for you ;) | http://www.bikeindia.in/motul

For this micro-site I have tried something really unusual from my designing style. Still it has that simplicity which you always find in my designs.

Now that you guys have seen it, do tell me what you think about it, did you like it or did you hate it. I am always up for all sort of criticism :D

Related links:
Website for Bajaj Corp Ltd.
FHMindia.com print ad

5 comments:

  1. Looks very nice overall, as usual :)
    There are a few minor glitches that I think need fixing though.

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  2. @shweta - thanx dear

    @shawin - thanx dude and thanx for pointing out those glitches, well try and work on them :D

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  3. Hi Aslam...

    Sorry for the late review yaar, but now you know the reason but for a reminder it was because this tinyurl thingy is blocked here is Saudi Arabia so I couldn't access your links... but now after seeing your work here I am with very neutral comments which we all (as designer) are looking for...

    The website is simple and user-friendly, I'm not web-designer but being art director in advertising I saw two flaws in your design...

    1) you have "Motul" logo on top which is good, then you are using it on the pics. It is repeating - not good, and on it the way they are being used... I think if you can bring the top logo little down with the red box with rounded corner (as it is used over the pics) and let it come over the flash file (I'm assuming website design can work like layers...) so you wont need repeat it over the pics.

    2) I think the pictures are taking to much space and because of it there is scroll on the page which can be avoided as per the content of the page and considering it the first (home) page. so it is much better if we can avoid having scroll for no reason. and for this I think you can decreases the height of main pics just 10% the whole content can fit on one page without scrolling...

    don't get offended bro... these are purely my suggestions as per design...

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  4. hey bro, thanx for finally giving time for my blog and commenting :P
    and dont ever think i will get offended with any kind of comment bcoz i dont and i like it when some criticizes me and gives me honest comments. It helps me improve :)

    Your both the points are taken and will always keep in mind.
    thou just want to mention that initial we didnt had the repeating logos in the pic but then client insisted (you know how it works)

    hmm you are right about pictures taking too much space but there is not much content on the homepage however will try and do something abt it thanx for pointing it out bro

    :D

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Well I am a web designer basically, and creating logo has been a major part of my portfolio and career. Decided to make this blog so that I can share my experience of designing to the world Pls. feel free to comment or send me an email on aslammemon@gmail.com Thank you

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